Title: The Persecution of Mildred Dunlap
Author: Paulette Mahurin
Pages: 202
Genre: Fiction
Review By: Engelia McCullough
In 1895 there are several events occurring around the world. Perhaps one of the most prevalent events being the imprisonment of poet Oscar Wilde in Britain. Across the pond, in a small town in Nevada, Mildred Dunlap is trying to prevent a similar persecution.
Starting with the cover, author Paulette Mahurin sets the tone for the book. It's a story of fear, anxiety, intolerance and hope. Red River Pass is a town that lives through the daily telegrams delivered via Morse code to the telegram office. Messages that the local gossip, Josie, makes sure is distributed throughout Red River Pass. Known as the town benefactor, Mildred Dunlap does her best to steer clear of Josie and her gaggle of friends and for good reason.
On a sprawling ranch outside of town, Mildred lives with her cousin, Edra. As the town is whipped into a frenzy over the Wilde incident; Mildred hatches a plan that she believes will secure her and Edra's future. However, as with all best laid plans, things do not turn out as she expects them to.
I love the language used by Mahurin to describe the various locations and progress in the book. From the "nightime merged into a new day" to "the seeds that grow and inflate the smallest minds into giants..." the reader is left with a colorful description of the characters internal thoughts and how they relate to their surroundings. There are times when the wording used is not in line with the era. Such as, "grab a bite to eat" which lends itself to more of a modern tone.
I would have liked to have seen a little more tension at the beginning of the story. Based on the title, I half expected the book to open with a trial or persecution of sorts. Or to at least have one by page 80 or so. As I read the book, I found the word"persecution" to be more of a metaphor. That Mildred was almost persecuting herself as a result of her strong feelings and need to protect Edra.
Edra is a character that gives the story an increased sense of uncertainty. A survivor of a horrible incident as a child, Edra still harbors some of that pain and insecurities. As a result, she often reacts to Mildred's actions brashly and is someone that the reader feels sorry for.
The Persecution of Mildred Dunlap is a book that clearly highlights the history of discrimination and the intolerance and ignorance of those around us. It resonated with me how we must be aware orfand respectful of those that are different or select an alternative lifestyle. At the end of the day, it really is none of our business and as long as they are happy and not hurting anyone: Does it matter?
Author and Book Links:
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http://thepersecutionofmildreddunlap.wordpress.com/
http://bookpromogroup2.weebly.com/paulette-mahurin.html
http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_noss_1?url=search-alias%3Daps&field-keywords=the+persecution+of+mildred+dunlap
From the Author of The Truth Series. A Maryland born and raised writer, avid reader, blogger and all around cool chick.
Tuesday, February 19, 2013
Tuesday, February 12, 2013
Guest Post: Jazzing Up the Editing Process
Today I'm excited to present a guest post by writer and blogger, SK Valenzuela. I came across her website when she sent me an email requesting a book review. As I popped over to her sites, I was really impressed with her blog that offers writers a plethora of writing advice in an interesting way. I asked her to write a guest post for my blog and she accepted. So, sip on your drink of choice and enjoy the ride!
Jazzing Up the Editing Process
For many writers,
there’s something about the prospect of editing that seems to drain energy and
sap enthusiasm. After the exhilarating creative process of writing, editing
seems like the place where creativity goes to die. But whether we like it or
not, editing is a critical step in the process of bringing a work to
publication, whether you plan to submit your work to a traditional
agent/editor/publisher or publish your work yourself.
Think about everything
that the editing process does for your book. It ensures that your style matches
your subject. It checks the consistency of your characters and your plot. It
makes sure that your grammar is flawless and your dialogue sparkles. And it
makes sure that there is nothing in your story that doesn’t belong there. The
process of publishing a book is not unlike filming a movie. The writing process
is like the acting, directing, and filming. Editing is the costume and set
design, the hair and makeup, and the cutting room. Together, they make a
blockbuster.
Without stellar
editing, your creative masterpiece will remain rough and unpolished and utterly
unappealing to your readers. So, there’s a lot to be said for fostering a love
affair (or at least a working business relationship) with the editing process.
Here are a few easy ways to make your editing more efficient and less painful.
1. Finish the first
draft.
This can be helpful
both for those who really hate the editing process and for those who can’t seem
to shut off their inner perfectionist. For the perfectionist, trying to edit as
you write can be paralyzing. Those who hate or fear the editing process may
remain in the writing bubble for as long as possible. So, if you designate a
time for editing, you free yourself to get the work of writing finished and you
set a deadline for moving into the polishing phase of your work.
2.
Fresh
eyes.
Once you’ve finished
your first draft, set it aside for a few days (or weeks). If you’re still too
close to the story, you can be blind to its flaws. Letting it rest and giving
your mind a creative vacation can allow you to approach it with fresh eyes. As
you take a long, hard look at your manuscript, don’t be afraid to be ruthless
with it. It will be a better product if you are.
3.
Break out of the box.
One of the biggest
challenges of self-editing is the tendency of our minds to autocorrect. Our eyes gloss over misspellings and
grammatical errors. We know what we meant to say or how that dialogue is
supposed to sound, so our mind fixes any issues with flow or description as we
read. To switch off autocorrect, we need to kick the mind out of its comfort
zone. To do that, try one (or several) of these techniques:
• Change the font. If you use a basic font
like Times New Roman, change everything into a completely different font, like
Courier or Comic Sans. Your words look different and the spacing changes, so
you trick your brain into thinking its seeing the manuscript for the first
time.
• Change the font color. Avoid bright or
neon colors that would hurt your eyes if you read for a long time, but again,
you’re looking for something that changes the look of your manuscript. Try a
dark blue, green, or purple.
• Change the margin size and the font
size. Same idea: make your brain think this is something completely new.
4.
Get
in the zone.
This tip actually
comes from the wonderful dynamic duo of CJ Lyons and Joanna Penn, who together
run a wonderful ProWriter course on Joanna’s website, The Creative Penn. Try
establishing an “editing zone” in your house that is different from your usual
writing zone. At the very least, try using a different chair. Sitting at the
“editing desk” or in your “editing chair” can put your mind in the editing zone
and help keep you focused on the task at hand.
5.
Read
with Reader’s Eyes
Once you get your
initial edits completed, try exporting your file to your Kindle or other
e-reader. How does it come across on the digital page? This is like using a
proof copy to check for spacing, margin, and other errors, so it helps you to
find and fix any formatting mistakes before you upload your book. It serves
another purpose as well: when you see your book as your readers will see it, it
switches your brain out of writer mode and into reader mode. This mode is best
for editing for plot and character consistency. Does the story move you the way
you thought it would? Are there places where the pacing is off? Have a short
list of issues you are reading for (like plot, timeline, and character
consistency) and see what else you find.
The bottom line: do
whatever you need to do in order to embrace the editing process, which is at
least as vital to your work as the creative process of writing. Find an
effective process for managing your editing and stick with it. Your work--and
your readers--will thank you.
BRIEF BIO

S.K. has been
a lover of the written word since childhood, and she’s been writing stories for
as long as she can remember. Her interest in the intertwining of history,
mythology, and the artistry of language inspires much of her work, including
her sci-fi/fantasy adventure series, The Silesia Trilogy.
The first two books of the trilogy, Silesia:
The Outworlder and The Lords of Askalon, are currently available. The
third book, The Artifex, will be released this summer.
When she’s
not writing novels, you can find her freelancing about writing and all things
parenting. She also loves good music, chocolate, and playing with her kids. She
lives in Dallas, Texas, with her husband, six beautiful children, a stately
cat, and a flock of backyard chickens.
You can visit
her on her writing blog at sistermuses.wordpress.com and find out more about her
current projects at skvalenzuela.com.
Sunday, February 10, 2013
Book Giveaway- The Persecution of Mildred Dunlap
Enter below for your chance to win one of two Kindle books from Amazon. The Persecution of Mildred Dunlap has been described as an 'exceptional and moving' piece of writing. Writer, Paulette Mahurin, is graciously giving away 2 Kindle copies to two lucky entrants.
Enter now for your chance to experience this book. All profits from the sale of this book go to support the animal shelter: http://sparcsaveslives.org/
Book Summary: A women's Brokeback Mountain. The year was filled with memorable historical events: the Dreyfus Affair divided France; Booker T. Washington gave his Atlanta address; the United States expanded the effects of the Monroe Doctrine in South America; and Oscar Wilde was tried and convicted for gross indecency under Britain's recently passed law that made sex between males a criminal offense. When news of Wilde's conviction went out over telegraphs worldwide, it threw a small Nevada town into chaos. This is the story of what happened when the lives of its citizens were impacted the Wilde news. It is a chronicle of hatred and prejudice with all its unintended and devastating consequences, and how love and friendship bring strength and healing.
BOOK'S BLOG:
http://thepersecutionofmildreddunlap.wordpress.com/
Author Bio: Paulette Mahurin, an award-winning best selling author, is a Nurse Practitioner who lives in Ojai, California with her husband Terry and their two dogs--Max and Bella. She practices women’s health in a rural clinic and writes in her spare time. She is an animal advocate and has been involved with dog rescue, along with her husband, for the past twenty-eight years.
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Monday, February 4, 2013
What Did You Survive in 2012?
Hello all! It's a month into the new year of 2013. It's about 3:27am EST and I find myself unable to sleep. So, what do I do? I reflect. I've never been one to make New Year's resolutions. But at the end of 2012, I did sit down and write a list of all the things I survived or accomplished in 2012 and what I hope to do in 2013. But I refuse to call them New Year resolutions.
I have decided to share that personal list with all of you. In return all I ask is that you share yours as well. C'mon! Don't leave me hangin'.
2012
I have decided to share that personal list with all of you. In return all I ask is that you share yours as well. C'mon! Don't leave me hangin'.
2012
- I survived someone trying to get me fired. Oh yes! Thank God for my being a HR professional. All I can say people is DOCUMENT, DOCUMENT, DOCUMENT! There are some haters out there.
- Completed the first draft of my manuscript
- I got engaged over Xmas in Key West!
- Came to peace with some pressing family issues. WHEW! It was a doozy.
- I got a remote job which I've always wanted
- My job allowed me to travel to new places I've never been before
- Met some great new people and established new friendships, got rid of the burdensome friendships (In the words of Mary J. Blige: NO DRAMA!)
- Knocked sky diving (FYI- Loved it but will NEVER do it again) and ice skating (I don't like the cold so this is a huge accomplishment) off of my bucket list
- Started a healthier lifestyle
- Go to print or start submitting the first installment of The Truth Series to agents
- Pledge not to hurt the man I will be married to in September. Yes, this is a hard one to all those ladies out there. Just kidding, guys. You know we love you! But seriously, if he leaves his shoes in the middle of the floor or the toilet seat up one more time...
- Continue to work on managing stress
- Not sweating the small stuff or holding on to things I can't control
- More confidence in myself and the things I can accomplish
- Kick procrastination in the butt
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